Tender temps, I am fierce
in my devotion ~ claws
dig deep in flesh exposed
for answers hunted ~ tasted.
Relentless desires, belie me
love received nestles within
courting waltzing spirits,
candle delicate, claws retract.
Circling,
hunters make the best pray
for the depth of the chase
rests in our surrender.
A contest entry
- Fantasy Picture Inspiration by AliceinPoetryLand.
525 points, ended May 17, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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a good piece here though what immediately caught my eye was at the beginning you start the lines using capital letters which is all good but then you move from that and start using lower case letter. it would look a lot better either one way or the other
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thanks, opps I missed that I wish there was a way to make "word" not capitalize every line. fixed
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An excellent write, very forceful yet wonderful.
Thanks so much for your entry.
Gaylene
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Nice
Another excellent piece to go with this painting. I liked this a great deal. Very forceful and honest. Well done poet. ~ ~Pamela
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