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Dream Maker

She weaves her dreams, her inspirations scatter far and wide,
The children’s hopes, anticipation of magic lullaby’s
Tousled heads lay down to sleep, she makes their dreams seem true,
She slips inside, their restful minds are peaceful through and through.
Throughout the night they have their fun, adventure and dangers abound,
She stays with them, the maker of dreams, to keep them safe and sound.
Then they awake, eyes full of delight, her calling is all done,
She silently leaves a smile on the face of each and every one.

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  • Denierim
    May 21, 2007

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    I like the rhyme and the flow in this piece. The story is a wonderful one and left a smile on my face, and I really do like about that in poetry. All in all a wonderful piece worth reading over and over again


    • Perception 5
      May 22, 2007
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      Thank you Denierim. If I knew how to do the emoticons I'd give you a hug


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    May 17, 2007

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    Thanks so much for a most captivating write. I love this very much. It flows very nicely and the story weaves beautifully.
    Thanks so much for this entry.
    Gaylene