I'm so broken now
I feel so numb
This pain controlling
Cannot be undone
(My fears) Begin to manifest inside
(My tears) Weeping blood now when I cry
What if doesn't happen?
What if it cannot work?
What if is shatters, broken?
What if it's not worth? (Waiting)
I drink a drop of potion, each time I hear you name
(A drug of you for me)
I sip a cup of poison, when your voice calls my name
(Empathy of the pain you feel)
Your so far away from me, I try to see
Your picture lives inside of me, Will our LOVE always be?
What is the cost, that I must pay?
What if it's lost, the LOVE we have today?
Can you promise me, here you'll stay?
Can you say to me, forever always!?
I am lost all alone, only with your voice to guide me
My troubles they will hone, raining down on me
But is my spirit just enough, to keep you solid
Or will you melt away, and leave me stranded?
Tell me how! How do you plan, to satisfies your feelings, for another woman
Tell me how! Do you know, she won't take you away from me (Is it really meant to be?)
What if I can't come see you?
What if I can't hold you?
What if my lips, will never grace your face?
What if I can't find you?
What if I can't hide you?
From our enemies, in the comfort of our resting place?
If it doesn't, happen to...
Work between, me and you...
Can I count on, your LOVE to thrive...?
If it doesn't let us...
Help us, guide us...
Can I count on, your LOVE to survive...Make me alive!
What do you want to do?
Because I only want one thing, and that one thing is you!
What if...?
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Simply speachless, thats all I can say, I really can't tell you more that the fact that I am speachless. I know you and your love are going to go far and live a great life. Have fun man, I can only hope I cna hang around long enough to see you two happy.
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I love you
I want to stay with you for the rest of my life, that's what I want. Forget about that girl, forget about all those guys your scared will take me away. I'm not happy unless I hear your voice, I don't want to breath and I definately don't want to live without you.
You are my one, my only and hopefully you'll be my husband one day soon.
I love you sweetie, NOTHING will ever change that.
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Wow, you really did a fantastic job with this piece, I'm jealous... You really put alot of emotion in this piece and the reader knows what your thinking and what you want. You outdone yourself on tis piece!
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So far it is completely moving, B, I tell ya, this is really moving for me, I can't wait to see the rest of it when it is done, Though my words can't express how this makes me feel, And I think I feel the way you do in this poem...I feel this way alot now.
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