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Showers for Heaven's Delight

Only when the sun,
  And moon would eclisp.
Could the goddest,
  Ride her precious cat.

Like a comet,
  Around the planets,
And thorugh the stars.
  Faster than a blink of the eye.

Collecting moon and star dust,
  Carring them all back home ,
And placing them in crystal jars.
  Mixing them for pure delight.


5-17-2007

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  • JoyfulWriter
    May 18, 2007

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    Very beautiful indeed! Gives the reader a most amazing scene that blesses the eyes and the heart....good work here...smiles, Terry


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    May 17, 2007
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    A most beautiful, captivating entry. Just beautiful. Thanks so much for your entry.
    Gaylene