To slumber in the
darkest shade of gray,
where sun challenges moon
for my attention.
Years and years of feeling
small in a vast place.
Wondering if prayers are ever
answered.
Amongst the clouds a piercing
of light... a sparkling star;
a billowing of omni-present
love.
A kiss blown from youthful lips,
a heavenly release,never to miss
goes straight to my heart.
The time has come, glory is here,
as fears find refuge in the abyss-
and I, vast in god's eyes.
A contest entry
- Colorful Image Contest by FaintWhispers.
450 points, ended May 30, 2007, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Wonderfully written, like the last line... where most feel they are a mote in gods' eye... you see it as being giant, a master piece that god is always watchin. Well done and best wishes to you in the contest.
Mouser
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thank you so much for the lovely comment!
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ah a kiss straight to the heart - the strings vibrate and music is fluttered through the veins with love
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That was very lovely and gave me a peaceful feeling.
I loved it, and thanks for putting the picture on there for me to see, it helped. :]
Great job.
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