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Make Believe

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Into a world of make believe

    softly hidden in the realms of fantasy

A gentle world we never share

    for lynx says~secrets grow there

Faeries dance and moonbeams play

    reality waits for another day

The many colors of natures hand

    creatures wisdom will astound

I fly upon magic wings

    soaring high above everything

Peace will guide my restless soul

    as a warm imagination takes hold...

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  • Dark Otter
    May 10, 2008

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    I am glad to see you in

    the Enchanted Realm spreading your wings to fly high above us. You will be a welcome addition to the Fey Folk here. Congratulations on this very golden moment. Flights of imagination open our eyes to infinite possibilities.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      May 10, 2008
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      Amazira

      for within the magic does come many wonders and lots of fun thank you Wolf


  • Puppydog gold member
    May 3, 2008
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    JUST BEAUTIFUL!!!

    What a beautifull and exciting journey into fantasyland. 's


  • Lady Altheia
    October 17, 2007

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    Hoodwinked

    Bravo, I love to write fantasy stories. Those i have been writing for awhile. Congrats on the double trophies.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      October 18, 2007
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      Lady Altheia

      Im so very happy you enjoyed my little fairy tail Thank you kindly love


  • Marzipan
    October 13, 2007

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    hoodwink

    This spins a beautiful image. I love the idea of moonbeams playing and soaring high up veiwing this phantasmagorical world from above, peacefully, as though you're not actually a part of it and are merely seeing, like when reading a book or listening to a piece of music. Great write xxx


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      October 13, 2007
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      Marzipan

      Thank you so much for the wonderful comment! Im very pleased you enjoyed it so much


  • Swan song gold member
    July 14, 2007
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    Very wonderful. you do so well with these.


  • Lowell Poe
    June 6, 2007

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    I know I say it all the time, but you should really be proud of this one.This is your niche,fantasy, tales of animal spirits, glowing moons that pave the way for mystical tales.I like [fairys dance and moonbeams play,
    reailty waits for another day.]There lies almost the essence of poetry in that line...fending off reailty, distraction.I can't think of a more beautyful way to elude bordom then making believe.

    MUCH LOVE,

    TENBEARS

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      June 6, 2007
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      lowell poe

      You do me honor my brother TEN BEARS with your sweet words...Thank you so much for the comment, means a lot coming from you


  • NotAMolly
    June 6, 2007

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    A magical journey! I really enjoyed it, I especially like the painting. This poem really had a hold of my imagination. Nice!


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      June 6, 2007
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      willowleaf77

      Thank you very much and im thrilled you enjoyed it...Isn't an imagination wonderful!


  • lake of dremas
    June 5, 2007
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    another lovely one!


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      June 5, 2007
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      nounou dark

      you are so kind you make me blush with your sweet comments so very glad you enjoyed

  • Swan song gold member
    June 5, 2007

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    There is a reason tjhios has one two golds that is because it is very very good. I like the flow and the feel it gave me.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      June 5, 2007
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      jeff swan

      Thank you for your kind comment and thrilled you enjoyed it...Nothing like a wonderful imagination


  • Amera gold member
    June 1, 2007

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    Oooooooo.... this is magical! Lovely, I can see why it won tons of gold. You are amazing!

    Love,
    Amera ♥


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      June 1, 2007

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      Amera

      O' thank you so much for your kind words of praise and so very glad you enjoyed


  • DragonessTawnya
    May 31, 2007
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    You write with much passion and emotion. I love this. The imagery is amazing. Thanks for sharing.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      May 31, 2007
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      DragonessTawnya

      Hello little dragon and thank you very much for the sweet comment, so happy you enjoyed it


  • ceegeeess
    May 30, 2007

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    To live in infatuation!

    Peace will guide my restless soul

    as a warm imagination takes hold"It is so true dear sweet Ann!


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      May 30, 2007
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      ceegeeess

      Thank you very much for your swwet comment...to have a imagination is to stay young...so glad you enjoyed it


  • Whoochi gold member
    May 28, 2007

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    Splendid, uplifting piece here. Magical, wonderment and vivid imagery. The rhyme and flow seems to just spill forward without any hint of a stumble. the picture is gorgeous...love the last 2 lines.." Peace will guide my restless soul as a warm imagination takes hold.." sighs...ah, yet where would we be if we had no imagination...Excellent! Congrats on the double gold up there...well earned!


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      May 29, 2007
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      Whoochi

      Thank you so much my little sister for your very sweet comment...means a lot to meand so glad you enjoyed it


  • freespirit51
    May 28, 2007

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    Wonderful words my wise and wonderful sister. I love your words of make believe and congrats on the double gold.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      May 29, 2007
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      freespirit51

      Thank you so very much my sweet sister...so happy that you enjoyed it was fun to write


  • Meme Wheeler
    May 24, 2007

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    How Sweet!

    I love this...I am a fan of fairies, and hope somehow they are real....lol! This poems reminds me of my childhood whimsical fantasies...you took me back to this magical time in my life...thank you.



    "Faeries dance and moonbeams play
    reality waits for another day
    The many colors of natures hand
    creatures wisdom will astound
    I fly upon magic wings
    soaring high above everything..."


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      May 24, 2007
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      Meme Wheeler

      O' im so glad you enjoyed this poem it was so much fun to write...makes us kids again dont it


  • Lady-Pegasus
    May 24, 2007

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    WOW, sis this is surely amazing, thank you for offering this! I do think the astound/hand slant is a bit of a stretch but otherwise this is amazing! Love IT! Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors. Hetohke'e


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      May 24, 2007
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      Lady-Pegasus

      So very glad you enjoyed it my sister. I really enjoyed the two contests.

  • Liquid memories
    May 22, 2007

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    delightful and touching

    I too love that travel and the carefree trips and fantasy and dreams, that make it all possible. Just remember you are not alone, my dear friend.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      May 22, 2007
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      Lonewolf2007

      Thank you my most wonderful friend...your comment means a lot to me

  • Bob Fox
    May 21, 2007

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    Ah so true

    and the poets love a tender song that brings them to their feet. A guidance way above the norm , true without deceit

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      May 22, 2007
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      BobFox

      Thank you so much dear friend it means a lot to here from you and im pleased you enjoyed my poem I really enjoyed writing this one


  • Fire Storm
    May 18, 2007

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    beautifully penned

    your wrds filled with magical love and peace shos the compassion in your heart and mind ,,,I love reading about faeries and magic especially since my muse is a faerie herself which graciously shares her talent with me, I look foward to reading more of your lovely poetry,,,,blessings of love,light,life....Fire Storm


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      May 20, 2007
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      Fire Strom

      Thank you so much for your very sweet comment and most happy that you enjoyed it


  • arafura gold member
    May 17, 2007

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    warm imagination...

    Beautifully written.

    Lovely imagery and fine craftsmanship!

    Love the last two lines.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      May 18, 2007
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      arafura

      Thank you so much my new friend for your kind words Im so glad you enjoyed it

  • deleteit
    May 17, 2007

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    I love that world of make believe. Your dreams are limitless and you described that sentiment well within your words. The picture and words just mesh so well together, making it a delight to read. Best wishes in the contest


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      May 17, 2007
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      Shadoe

      Thank you so much my new friend and im thrilled you enjoyed it so much


  • troyias silver member
    May 17, 2007

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    Wonderful

    Beautifully written and goes perfectly with the Picture. the rythem and word choice ar astounding and perfect. A genuine world of perfect fantasy. Great Job.

    *Go with God* my sister,

    Silver Moon


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    May 17, 2007

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    Oh my this is so truly captivating. I love it! beautiful imagery which matches the picture perfectly.
    Thank you for sharing.
    Gaylene


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      May 17, 2007
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      AliceinPoetryLand

      I am so glad you liked it and thank you for such a sweet contest...hope you have lots of poems to enter...

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