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A Broken Shell

A broken shell,
Lost inside herself,
tears of blood run in her heart.
Darkness consumes her,
A blackness that can't be broken.

She remembers how it was,
Under the moon,
standing in the silver light.
His arm around her,
slowly fading from her side.

Lost in her sorrow forever.

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  • Fire N Ice
    May 28, 2007

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    Heartbreak at its most painful hour,
    this is a powerful piece,
    good luck in our contest and thankyou for the entry