Back to School

New little thoughts,

a hundred smiles

on known and

unknown faces…

swinging through

doors to rooms,

walls that trap

me and you…

Dazzling time

drowning in a tear drop,

melancholy slaps us…

throwing hugs

to me, flying kisses

for our last year,

a last day

now inside a cloud -

Graduated!

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Ok. This poem is about first day of school in the last year of school. I know what it feels like.

Abstract is the best by trytothink. 300 points, ended May 30, 2007, 17 entries
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individuality
May 16, 2008

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ah school it has been a long time since i graced the school's halls, a good piece here that shows an end of an era.
Lyndon
July 25, 2007

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This free verse poem
has accessibility. This is the first rule many do not follow. You have a delightful metaphor that is well modulated and therefore able to change enough to make this poem excellent. Ron.
trytothink
May 29, 2007
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Thank for joining my contest, and good luck!
gothkat2
May 17, 2007
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cool i like it
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  May 17, 2007
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  nice. thanks.