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lunar crease

 

lunar crease of eye in crater

cleft as canyon fissured dream

 

upon a breath

of feather floundered

slow in fathomed fear released

 

to flow downstream

as mend in bend,

of word

in blow upon loves arm to hold

 

her closer than the tear

glazed upon a trodden cheek

 

released in song of Mothers peace

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  • kaibab silver member
    May 17, 2007
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    beautiful


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    May 17, 2007
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    Beautiful as usual. Your style cannot be hidden. Thank you for sharing this fine entry.
    Gaylene