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The Way

How can I say?
You just run away, you just run away
Ain't that the way?
You just run away, you must run away

And I think you know just what I want
I think you see I only want you now

But how can I say?
Anything
You just run away
You must run away

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  • Tumbleweed
    January 16, 2008

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    This thing won't let me applaud without writing a comment in this box. I have a headache and don't really feel like trying to critique anything or make suggestions right now, wish I could just applaud, but oh well...I'm just going to babble for a while, then copy and paste this comment into the comment boxes on the other poems of yours I want to applaud. You know I think your poems are awesome, anyway. So, blah, blah, rhythm, blah, rhyme scheme, blahdey blah, imagery. LOL. Kick ass poem