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Enamored

As wind whistles through leaves,
And pen caresses page,
The sweet scent of pavement
After newly-fallen rain,
When the suckling of babes concludes,
With contented bellies full,
And the muses light in riotous form
Upon the artist’s soul,
And virgin eyes upon the words
Of wisdom etched in stone –

These things, these beautiful things,
Are what I feel for you.

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A love poem that doesn't include the word, "love."

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  • Blue Rew silver member
    May 20, 2007

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    The tenderness overflows here and the aching light of those words that need not be spoken when they are so readily shown. Poetry at it's finest. Blue


  • Ethereal One gold member
    May 17, 2007

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    excellent expression

    I love all of the beautiful images you have created in this poem. Such a soft, quiet mood is felt in each line. This is a wonderful way to feel about someone.

    Thank you for entering this contest, and good luck!

    Aurora 2012