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Forest Of Fire

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Fire rains from the heavens,
illuminating the sky.
Igniting the perspicacity
of an appreciative eye.

Brilliant conflagrant signatures,
drawn by natures calligraphy,
sets ablaze the forests veneer,
with panoramic telemetry.

Explosions of vibrant coloration,
burst star like overhead.
Natural fireworks displayed,
coruscates the landscape widespread.

Symphonic orchestration,
fortissimo and bold.
Delighting an awe filled audience,
a perfect performance to behold.

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  • Arkbear gold member
    May 18, 2007

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    Absolutely Gorgeous ~

    As a Nature Lover,

    this takes my breath away ~

    The picture is magnificant ~

     

    Such a vibrant choice of grammatical hues to awaken

    my palette and breathe fresh air into my aveolar sacs ~

     

    Splendid my Dear ~

     

    The best to you in this contest ~

     

    Always,

     

    Bear ~


  • penman gold member
    May 18, 2007

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    Excellent

    Oh my did you describe this image so very well. A terrific poem. Very touching and thoughtful. Good luck in the contest.


  • Frozentearz
    May 17, 2007

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    ohhhhhhh this was very beautiful,
    you have captured the essences of an autumn day too
    perfection..
    ahhhhhh thanks for sharing,
    Love and Light
    Tearz


  • Puppydog gold member
    May 17, 2007

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    SO SOFT AND BEAUTIFUL!

    A bright autumn day can be brilliant with vivid colors. They do indeed seem like a fire that is raging around us in the forest. A most beautiful one though.


  • smiley
    May 17, 2007

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    Awesome

    the picture is breath taking and the poem goes perfect with it..

    Yvonne


  • DarkHunter
    May 17, 2007

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    This is really beautiful, bursting with strong imagery.
    Your talent just keeps growing.
    Best of luck in the contest.


  • troyias
    May 17, 2007

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    Beautiful

    Your vocabulary is rich and vibrant. Words well c hosen. You have done a great job with this the rythem perfect and amazing. Great Job.

    *Go with God* my friend,

    Valerie


  • honey bear
    May 17, 2007

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    wow.. how beautiful this is *jaw drops in amazement* wow
    good luck in the contest with this beautiful write


  • Nature Song silver member
    May 17, 2007
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    'Brilliant conflagrant signatures,
    drawn by natures calligraphy,
    sets ablaze the forests veneer,
    with panoramic telemetry'

    Natures callligraphy sets the forest ablaze! Wonderful imagery this stanza creates. Thank you for entering my contest. Sie

    Please do not comment back!

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