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Choice

Fluttering, twinging, jerk of life


Later squalling, squid baby reaching for everything


Money covering its butt, poured down its throat


Shaming you in school, embarrassed by your existence


Impervious to your pain, feeling only its angst


Damning you for deeds and views, awaits your death


Yes, heck, yes! I'd do it all again.

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  • Lj-
    May 23, 2007

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    Very cool presentation. I like the ascending font sizes and varieties.
    Ending line was a nice closing.


    Thank you for entering,
    Good luck!


  • Wandika gold member
    May 22, 2007
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    Strange

    But I would too.