Breath
let thoughts
be gentled
lost
within the night’s
current
as darkness
flows
tides flood free
amidst the deeper
recesses
of consciousness
and out
again
in
ebb
~n~
flow
of dream.
Awaken
here
where
the universe
tumbles and shifts
like so many
beached scatterings
stones
~n~
shells
a washed
by sentinel waves.
Rise
essence
in the wind
above the universe
transient souls convene
to celebrate
celestial homecomings
a simple journeys
amidst
time’s
gracious granted glimpses
beyond
what hold us here.
A contest entry
- Colorful Image Contest by FaintWhispers.
450 points, ended May 30, 2007, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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That was wonderful,
I loved that you didn't put it normal lines..
It was a lot more apealing to read.
Great job.
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Wonderful
Oh I did like this very much, and yes, it truly does remind me of the book I'm reading. I love the art of Josephine Wall as well. This is really quite good. Your last lines pull it all "home". Well done. ~Pamela
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"Breath
let thoughts
be gentled
lost
within the night’s current"
Sighhh...How lovely & serene this penning is, Poet...Gorgeous, my Friend...Good luck in the contest, Sweetie...
Wanda
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