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Beside the river

I feel the sun on my face
Making me feel cool, and mixture of the sun and the river next to me.
I see lovely leaves
Blooming
As we do in our lives.
The river trickling down on it's adventure
Some parts of the river stopped by rocks
But it still flows.
I sigh at the sight of a blue bird
In it's nest
Keeping it's eggs warm
I feel like I am in haven
The golden gate is the golden leaves
The sun is my friend
To lead me to a better place.
Birds chriping at the sound of spring
The angels singing
Smiling down at the good
As the sun sets
I sit here thinking
God made such a great place,
a place called Earth
As Earth changes seasons
on after another
Fall;
the leaves changing colors of it's mood
Winter;
the snow
white crystals
Spring;
the sun peeping it's head every now and then
Summer;
time to sip rocks
no worries
One word for this is:
Beautiful

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  • Marcus.
    June 1, 2007

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    i wish ive seen a place like that. heavan on earth is yet to be found for me. this poem rocks good job.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    May 17, 2007

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    i tottally a agree with you and am sadden that i have yet to see things like that, i hope to one day, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • Nature Song silver member
    May 16, 2007

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    Beautiful describes so many things, based on the interpretation of the reader. Inpiring poem, loved the images it provokes! Good luck in my contest ~Sie

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