Shattered +morphine+ kisses
glitter with metallic vodka
Her |p|a|s|t| isn’t so pretty, darling
Graveyards scattered
through {butterfly} nightmares
hollow with rainbows
&& .prescription. pills
Ruby drinking games
followed by cocaine /s\e/x\,
half smoked cigarettes,
&& [[toxic]] hopes
Screaming lies
into her :bleeding: ears
(oh baby, should love be this pretty)
-->Devastating<-- isn’t it?
how worthless dreams can be
scared of nothing but you ♥doll♥
her favorite coffin to lie [die] in
Author notes
{X}.WordBank.{x} option
I used:
Morphine
Lies
Vodka
Cocaine
Screaming
Bleeding
Drinking
Shattered
Hopes
Dreams
Glitter
Ruby
Metallic
Rainbows
Butterflies
Nightmares
Prescription
Pills
Scattered
Scared
Nothing
Worthless
Kisses
Toxic
Coffin
Hollow
Graveyard
A contest entry
- 203;203;203;203;203;203;​​;​;&#& by WhatLiesBeneath.
690 points, ended July 15, 2007, 52 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~*~All Your Dirty Pretty Comes Here~*~ by xxRainbowDawnxx.
625 points, ended December 30, 2008, 58 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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some things just are dirty and we can't help what they are... my past is dirty, but most of it is concealed from the rest of the world, especially to those I care about so they are not dissappointed with me.
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This was really good, thank you for sharing, i liked the word bank idea, i never thought of that before. great job and keep it up!
much lvoe kaydee
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Wow.. you used alot of words from the workbank for a short poem. But I liked it, alot. You worded it well and it flowed reasonably well too. I do enjoy reading dirty pretty poems, so it made reading this better for me. Thanks for entering.
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