You glance at me from across the room
A warm feeling encases my body
Your eyes piercing through my mind
deep into my thoughts
Aware of your power over me
Knowing I will succumb to your every wish
You lick your lips before you raise your glass
teasing me with your tongue
The heat rising through my body
intoxicating my senses
I am dizzy with lust
Slowly you saunter over to me
brushing my shoulder with yours
as you walk right past me
Turning your head to look back
giving me a knowing smile
I watch, as you slip into a doorway
eagerly I follow
The room is dark except for the
moonlight peeking through the thin curtains
Grabbing me as I enter
your hot lips find mine
fear and desire controlling my response
Pushing me against the wall
hands, lips, teeth and tongues
Searching and finding
our passion out of control
steadily unwinding
The room is filled with the sound
of soft cries, muffled words,
and the rustling of garments
being removed or pushed aside
You raise my leg and grab
the back of my knee
Finding my wet, velvet box
you enter with confidence
Moving together in synch
we become one body
The tension and pleasure built up between us
is now released in a single massive explosion
Without a word we get ourselves together
to return to the party
You leave the room first
I follow, shortly thereafter
While I am getting another drink
You whisper in my ear
“To be continued when we get home”
Author notes
Intergroup Contest
In a list
A contest entry
- *Excite Me* by BlackArc.
2376 points, ended June 27, 2007, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Calling My Erotic, Sensual, Romantic Writers of ALL times on AP by Ephiphany.
500 points, ended November 5, 2007, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
1 - 12 of 12
-
This very sensual has a nice flow...love the imagery here...speaks to me;
thank you and Good Luck in the contest.
e
-
VERY hot piece Noreen...love the imagery this brings and the tasteful delivery
Nice job Sweetie!
Best of luck in the contest!
-
Wow! This very sensuous and erotic. I like, "You lick your lips before you raise your glass teasing me with your tongue." This really sets the tone. I enjoy your poems.
-
ohhh love wow this is amazing the imagery and seduction is outstanding very big claps coming your way xxx
-
This is definitely lovely, I like the emotional feelings your conveying here wow if I keep reading your writings I think I'll become a fish because I would constantly be taking cold showers. Ha-Ha
Wish you the best in your challenge...
-
WOW
Oh how I love this write...The ending is fantastic...I love the soft and gentleness that explodes with your words.Sensual,seductive and down right amazing...Enjoyed the write as you have done it so gracefully.
Blessings
~Cheryl~
-
WONDERFUL
Very delicious my friend...heart pounding, soul stopping, pure raw passion~was holding my breath with anticipation of the next move~Steamy my sister yes steamy
So wonderfully done, keep the pen to paper
-
Excellent Poem
I liked the picture with the words Great work,I liked thee background too.Keep the pen in hand!Lisa K Haslett Raytown Missouri! -
Wowww
This was a nice break fromt the party, i suppose. a quickie no less. I thouht while reading of the adverts on TV where the woman brushes past him, switching and he gets the point right away and soon follows. nicely done, I must say.
-
Ohhhhhhhhh love this~~~ Love any man who "saunters" over to me....woohooo Bring on Part 2..this is classical eroticism....good job! Good luck!
Adding your comment:
1 - 12 of 12
