Amphetamine day dreams
full of cancer
&& imperfections
Fake smiles
falling short of believable, darling
(so close)
Vinyl surgeons
bleeding her pretty
(almost)
Plastic screams of betrayal
corsets restraining
eyeliner perfection
Disappointment
carved into her eye shadow
thick with silent cries
glamour whore
of Hollywood
another ugly addiction
starved for perfection
Author notes
**and she died on the operating table**
Option 5
I used all of the words except knife && fixable
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Comments
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This really makes a statement. :]
I really like the line:
"another ugly addiction, starved for perfection"
Goodluck bbydoll--
animated ♥ -
wow.. this is fantastic... i mean.. WHOA
awesome... im loving it bbydoll
xxoo
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