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This is how it ends

Making small talk
in the middle of a crowded room.
Both trying to stay,
it's definately way too soon.

But the bell is ringing,
they can no longer deny.
Class is starting,
it's time to say goodbye.

She goes left, he goes right.
Too bad, it's time to part.
They're both trying, but it's so hard,
especially when you're fighting with your heart.

Everyone sees
and everyone knows,
they're meant to be together,
but hell, that's just how life goes.

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  • always feel pretty
    May 16, 2007

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    Aw, this is sooo good. Good job. I really liked it. The only thing is, "especially when you're fighting with you heart". Should be "your". Other than that, it was AWESOME.

    Thanks for the read,
    peace♥ryley---