My lips like .morphine.
smile with the devil
in an |e|v|e|n|i|n|g| symphony
Hands (wrapped) around phone cords
bleeding with the temptation
of ripped ♥kisses♥
&& inhaled collisions
[[Friction]] building
in cellophane coated rooms
as -->matches<-- burn
down secret rendezvous’
+Cigarette+ butts
litter bullet hole walls
as complex /anxiety\
tears mirrors from the bedroom ceiling
[Doll], you know
you love the dirty way
I make you f-e-e-l
another lost reality
a :complacent: catastrophe
Author notes
"nobody puts baby in a corner"(from dirty dancing of course)
Option 1
I used all the words
&& a few words from the other word banks
and the phrases lips lke morpine
&& You love to hate me, dont you [doll} for my title
A contest entry
- $MONEY$ [S]u[c]c[e]s[s] F.a.m.e *~Glamour~* by Xombii.
601 points, ended May 28, 2007, 16 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i love this poem...its uber fantastic...i love it...you are so awesome and you have beautiful amazing poetry
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wow, this has a little bit of everything, and I'm impressed with the results. This is completley amazing. your flow was amazing, no over-puncuation. this is an amazing dirty pretty write. i love it.
[Doll], you know
you love the dirty way
I make you f-e-e-l
another lost reality
a :complacent: catastrophe
^^^^^^^ I love those lines, doll. this is fantastic.
thank you so much for entering my contest, and good luck.
♥♥
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