i can't seem to shake these demons
that blind and constrict me
lost in pure darkness
not a single light for me to see
i can't go on like this
i just can't last through this fight
thinking of him as i lay in bed
is what gets me through those nights
those pills they start to fade
and my mind gets heavy and weak
i haven't had an urge in awhile
but that blade is an old friend i seek
someone just come and save me
for life keeps getting worse
why can't it get better for one day?
or forever am i cursed?
please just let me see the light
make me know i'm not alone
as i wish to cut with that blade
just cut right to the bone
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hey
When you say "those pills start to fade"
I must say I know what that is like -
Powerful!
WOW! I have goosebumps! No lies.
I love how I can feel the pain, the hurt, the almost pleading. It flows. The words are strong and stay with. You are so talented. AMAZING!!!
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Powerful, captivating, emotional.. amazing!
Wow, this is so much how I have been felling the last few days and I loveeed how I could relate to this.
You worded it just fantasticly and it flowed smoothly and your words were just so powerful, and, and.. it was beautiful.
You have so much talent in those fingertips of yours, I'm jealous
The last four lines really hit hime for me and I was just in a trance of untter emotion for a few minutes.
You truely, truely have talent.
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wow this is so powerful, you really have a great talent with a pen. very good job this is so expressive and so full of emotion beautiful work
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wow i love it.
sorry i havent commented in agers.
please just let me see the light
make me know i'm not alone
they were my favourite two lines
i can relate to them the most at the moment
Great write =]
Keep it up
<3Flo
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