A invisible ripple moves through us each day
Its fates way of making its decisions.
Sometimes you can get swept away in a new direction.
Completely changing your life.
Or maybe just get bumped around
Where time seems to stop and you go nowhere.
Author notes
Well I know this is short, It is just a thought I had.
A contest entry
- Awaken my Mind by Silent Cougar.
950 points, ended May 28, 2007, 27 entries
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This poem is very truthful and hits hard. I like the way you put it our there.
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and a very profound thought too. days come and go, and we have no idea what its going to hit us with. Thanks for your thought, it did the job and woke mine.
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yes, so true
life has a way of bumping us around and shaking us up as well, and then we go on and another ripple in life appears and we go again. Not to worry, all of us have those things that keep life from being smooth sailing.
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aye there are many ripples of life, we go with the flow to wherever, hopefully somewhere good, if not we can cry and then laugh later.
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Very simple yet philosophical.
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