Purple and pink disturb the blue surface.
Yellow hides behind the purple and pink ruffles.
Some orange is bundled in the corner of my sight.
The yellow fades into the pink,
That fades into the purple,
That fades into the ever darkening blue.
Among the horizon are black mountains, enhancing this beauty.
Sharp and tall, they stand strong under the
Purple, pink, blue, yellow, and orange surface of the sky.
These colors slowly fade and white dots replace them.
The sky is an amazing color of blue.
So dark.
Almost black.
The mountains have dissapeared from my sight,
Their color nearly matching the sky.
The moon replaces the orange bundle.
The details of the moon are as clear as the spots on a lepord.
Dark clouds glide across the sky, momentarly covering the moon and its lepord like details.
The dots fade into the dark blue,
That fades into purple, pink, yellow, and orange.
Purple and pink disturb the blue surface.
The yellow hides behind the purple and pink ruffles.
Some orange bundled in the corner of my sight.
The yellow fades into the pink,
That fades into the purple,
That fades into the ever lighening blue.
Author notes
I'd post a link to the picture I was inspired by, but I think it might take away a certain beauty from the poem. If you do want the link to the picture, IM me.
Please tell me what you think
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COLOR ALWAYS CATCHES THE EYE
THANKS FOR ENTERING THE CONTEST MAC -
Nicely done! Thank you so much for sharing and for being a part of the contest!!
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I loved this!
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"Purple and pink disturb the blue surface.
The yellow hides behind the purple and pink ruffles.
Some orange bundled in the corner of my sight.
The yellow fades into the pink,
That fades into the purple,
That fades into the ever lighening blue."
I love that part. Reading this poem, I can actually imagine this amazingly beautiful sunset. And I don't need to see the picture. Very beautiful! -
Muchas gracias
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Relaxing And Vivid
Your poem is phenomenal, as I read it I felt relaxed For the First Time In Years, and saw a vivid image of the senery though your wording it was amazing.
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this is good, the flow isnt so good thought, just make the lines have similer silibles and it would be a great peom! ty for entering!
~!~keep writing~!~
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Thanks for the comment. I'll keep that in mind next time.
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no prob, tyvm for entering a fresh poem! insted of just taking the easy way out and putting all prewritten! =)
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