Life; flows swiftly like a river
Life; keeps on beckoning me
Who knows when we will meet again
If ever, my friend
Because life flows on and on to the sea
Goodbye my friend
The world is getting older
Goodbye my friend it's beckoning me
Who knows when we will share this moment
If ever again
As we all flow ever onwards into eternity
Life; flows swiftly like a river
Life; beckons us endlessly
Who knows what lays beyond tommorrow
It's forever, my friend
Because life flows ever and ever to the sea
Goodbye my friend
The days are growing colder
Goodbye my friend they're beckoning me
Who knows what lies beyond this moment
Forever, my friend
We can only imagine if we are truly free...
Truly free...
Truly free...
Author notes
all about life, death & the whole box & dice...
A contest entry
- life by Morgan222.
300 points, ended June 8, 2007, 9 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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Great write loved the concept of this so true
Thank you so much for entering my contest,
And Good Luck!
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Great narrative power.
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I don't see how this pertains to life being a tapestry of color.
Thanks for entering though -
Yeah this has little to do with my contest... and I see here it's entered in about 15 other ones... I don't mind a person touring a good poem through multiple contests, but make sure you're on topic.
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Your poem is so true... I guess I should just relax and let life take me wherever... thanks for your entry, too tired to say more.
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an interesting poem, with good emotions
thanks for your entry
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Interesting poem ...
but it doesn't fit here. I asked for poems on the meaning of life. This only describes life, but there's nothing here about whatever you conceive to be its meaning.
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Sorry for the delay in judging; and thank you for taking the time to enter. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
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This has a really nice flow to it and has a really good structure which made it a lovely poem to read
thank you for entering..xo!" -
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wow kool poem wish
i felt tha same way u did but
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I liked this. Good flow and use of repetition
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good job, the repetition does this poem justice. It sounds as though you could almost put the lyrics to music, thanks for entering
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wow...this is such a lovely poem...love the repetition and the flow of your poem...but I love most is the ending which is very thought-provoking...I wonder if we are indeed truly free...
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great write well done
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Good use of repetition here. Well structured too because it wasn't at all redundant. A very nice flow to it. Thanx 4 the entry!
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It was a very good poem and thank you for entering but I do need the option number in the notes.
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Wow, that was really good! Thanks for entering, and good luck!
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This is a very nice piece my favorite lines are:
Goodbye my friendThe days are growing colder
Goodbye my friend they're beckoning me
Who knows what lies beyond this moment
Forever, my friend We can only imagine if we are truly free...Truly free...Truly free...
Thak you for your entry best wishes xxx
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this is stunning ... i really enjoyed this one thanks for entering into my contest...
cheers
jen
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its good
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I liked how you rhymed at the end of the stanzas. This is a unique piece. Goodluck in the contest.
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