i too, remain
in the misty colored
ashtrays of life.
i am certain
i once was more
than you ever dreamt.
i was lost at one time
but then again
weren't we all.
it's a pity to be
invisible against the
brilliant bright sun.
i too, existed
in the recesses
of your blacked heart.
i walked with giants
and dined with fairies;
slept with angels.
i pretended to be
a grand lady
or even a princess.
i lived in a sand castle
rich with toffee and
hot cocoa with whipped cream.
i too, pretended
i existed anywhere
although i do not.
i was unborn
the dead but not
yet dead.
i too, existed in
the after world of
never ever fucking land.
i too, existed
i too, existed...
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Comments
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Amazing use of word choice! I loved it! Your talent comes shining through in this piece.
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bravo
A very sad and a very potent piece, indeed, spooky and it makes me think of abortion...bravo...bravo..bravo... -
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I can understand how it can remind you of abortion but it's not about that. It's just about me and how I feel lately.
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Powerful words, the end took a twist I wasn't expecting, but I liked it. Emotional write. Well done.
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