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Dreams

It's been a while
I miss you

I cry thinking of what we could have been
What both of our futures hold

I guess I won't be in yours
I wish I were

I'm sad now that you're gone
But you'll always be in my heart

It's been a whole year
since I felt the way I did

I don't know when the next time is
that I'll see you

But I hope it's soon
I miss you

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  • InMemoryofCharlieJr
    June 14, 2007
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    Thanks!
    Opps I'll fix that right now. Thanks fo showing me my mistake

  • star wars fanatic
    June 14, 2007

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    I'm sad now that yor gone
    yor should be you're

    Nice thoughts represented and nice ending. I like the stanzas b/c the short paragraphs show short thoughts. I like it a lot. Nicely done.