Have you ever had popcorn on a stick
Drank your milkshake runny/thick
Found yourself in another world
Playing bozo to your boy and girl
Played solitary monopoly
Ran a race and lost to a flea
Advanced to the back of the class
Ever have visions of your past
Ever wondered what's in the mind of a bee
Took a notion and went to Alcatraz just for tea
Find both feet in your mouth
While your heart is heading south
Witnessed the descent of superfly
Failed your final exam to become a spy
Peeped into yourself and got a second thought
Then got lost inside, so it was all for nought
Saw your life being played out in scenarios
Couldn't obtain steak, so you ate cheerios
Dreamt yourself into loves' clutch
Only to discover it ain't that much
Ever wonder what is the point or when it will begin
Ever wish for a poet and her poem to come to an end?
A contest entry
- No more crying, Giggles only please! by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended June 1, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Abstract is the best by trytothink.
300 points, ended May 30, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I am sorry I thought this was cute but it was not what I was looking for in this contest.
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very awesome! Good luck!
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Thank you for entering my contest
Good luck, I will be making my final comments when the contest comes to its end:
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I like it
I have a poem exactly like this, called Have Ya Ever. Quite neat scenerio to pen about. Very visual, and chock full of awesome vocab. sweet
POETDONTKNOWIT
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Thanks Bunches
It's my silly side, that sometimes likes to come out and play. Thanks for your indulgence.
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abstract indeed...couldn't obtain a steak , so you ate cherrios.lol...sounds like me when i was single...very cool write that dazzles with dizziness...well done
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A Very Cool Review
I love this review...it rocks....thanks.
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imaginings
your mind is tearing around with this fine piece..can you ever sit still ..it has a really nice flow
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Hello
I can't explain, but for the next few______s, I am just having a little needed fun. Laughter is the best medicine, after-all, agree?
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