Time was lost in the pale nothingness of life
Years, and centuries. The lust for that liquid
Like fire through the veins
Tumbling through thoughts, never vanquished
Never conquered..
Perhaps diminished for a brief moment of peace
In the hell of centuries of life
Forced to follow the moons path, never to see
That ruby orb so essential to all that is life
And love...
Author notes
Topic 1- Vampires
Forbidden words:
night
immortal
suck
blood
eternity
vampire
red
black
shadow
A contest entry
- #13 contest. Taboo? Come here for a challenge. by Lord Merlynn.
450 points, ended May 17, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Wow, that's beautiful.
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this is a good write. Full of imagery and great word usage, good luck in my contest.
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