I had gotten to the Point
Where happiness was far away
Then you came
Taught me to smile again
Made it all okay
You were my sunshine
When I had a rough day
You were there
When things werent going right
You were there
When I was pissed at the world
You were there
You make me happy when skies are grey
I hated the world
The world hated me
You told me you would
Be there forever
I was happy
My only sunshine
My life got better
The world changed
Just cause you were there
I loved you
Please dont take my sunshine away
yet you did
Author notes
Option #5
A contest entry
- Options!! by forget my memories.
550 points, ended May 29, 2007, 19 entries
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Hey long time.. no see, my fault i spose. But anyways, as always, this is fantastic. What a creative way to use a nursery rhyme we all learn as little kids.
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I know what option it was put you didnt read the rules i asked you to put the options number in the author notes box. Thank you for entering it was a good poem next time please read the rules all the way threw.
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