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Just Kissed A Gal

Just kissed a gal who was not there
Exciting it was, raised my hair
In this place I am going to stay
Kiss more so she won't stray away

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  • superbanana
    July 30
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    little qwickie, very good
    good luck in the contest

  • i liked this piece. well written as well by the way. BRAVO!! keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!


  • sorries
    April 23

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    yeah ... this is called a fantasy. How did the kiss feel. I guess since it's all imagination it must have been pretty good? Nice write and thank you for entering

  • Wow. Good Luc


  • poetrandy
    October 17, 2008
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    Interesting! LOL!

    Good luck in the contest!


  • InMyFlames
    October 15, 2008
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    this is soo cute! i lov it, good job and thanks for entering


  • marciakay81
    June 4, 2008
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    this was interesting. definitely made me smile.


  • Poetess12
    February 25, 2008
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    Funny, it made me smile. This is a silly poem.
    Thanks for your entry in my contest.


  • HeavenScent4U
    February 24, 2008

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    maybe i have a dull se4nse of humor or i am tired but i didn't get this i feel like a putz lol best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    February 24, 2008
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    Short and to the point well done!!


  • Dr Satan
    August 16, 2007
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    I've been there.


  • Plastic Dreams
    July 29, 2007
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    Haha. Quirky simple and just. Enjoyed !!! Makes sense to me.


  • Wee Beastie
    May 16, 2007

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    hahahaha... this is fuunny i had to read it twice more to laugh even harder, good job on the quote

    ~~Chef W.B.

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