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Fire Breather

A gust of flame spruts from the beasts mouth
Below the villagers sheak with fear

As the Fire Breather appears out of blue

Scales sparkle eyes bright and intelligent

Fangs snap claws tear 

As Fire Breather appears

They villigers try to fight back

"Away ye evil beast"

A another burst of flame

A house starts to burn

Mothers and childern scream

As Fire Breather appears

It fly's away to it's pearch

Unitl Fire Breather appears once more the villigers may live in peace

And in frea of Fire Breather 

  

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  • Passionate Phoenix
    November 4, 2007
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    fabulous story but please read my rules first!! xx


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    May 31, 2007
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    :O That's one scary dragon! This is a adventurous piece you've done here. Good job!


  • riasme
    May 16, 2007

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    yaay for Young Poet Contests! I've won most of my trophies with these contests. Also, I'm going to send you the introduction/background information for the medieval contest. Nice to see another poem. See ya tomorrow

    lise