Lovely as the midnight breeze,
Inhaling beauty that is all so natural,
Lingering in the air
Across many oceans
Caressing all that is heavenly and pure.
Treasures of her heart,
Held so dearly,
Oh! How so sweetly
Under and beyond she brightens with her gold.
Glorious sounds fall from her lips,
Harmoniously it sprinkles
Thoughts of beauty and hope and
Showers everyone with her love and soul.
A contest entry
- Show my AP Wife Some love by getsbetter.
1600 points, ended May 27, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Such pretty words you have intangled through this beautiful acrostic, thank you...GETS
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To view the acrostic so that you can see the person's name, usually it is left aligned.
Lovely phrasing; well penned!
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Oh thanks i didn't realize i centred it...
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man, I want a wife like her....good thing I'm not married yet...I still have a chance. lol.
...but really, it was a beautiful poem.
-Thanx, Papyrus
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