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for Your Heart to Mend

Roses are red

    Violets are blue

Know my sister

    I will always love you....

In the gentle whisper of the wind

    a starry night and the milkyway

The sweet smell of a new day

I will send my love, your heart to mend

The cool damp grass of a  summers morn

    the rustling leaves as you pass

The softest whisper in your ear

I will send my love, for your heart to mend

Leave not room for sadness

  Let sweet memories take control

Dont forget the time will come

   We will walk together once more

I will send my love,for your heart to mend...

                        Love you my sister

                               forever more~

                                                  ~Richard~

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A poem of comfort for your lose~~~with hopes you will find in the days to come...

A contest entry

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  • Lady Altheia gold member
    October 17, 2007

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    Hoodwinked

    I like this. This is a nice thoughtful poem. You have a good heart to dedicate so many poems to people you care about.


  • KainLegin
    June 14, 2007

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    So calm

    and so beautiful in every word it has. The feelings are so beautiful, I simply love this poem very much. Bookmark for sure. Thank you so much for sharing your beautiful words with us.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      June 15, 2007
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      KainLegin

      O' thank you so very much my friend for your very sweet comment...Im so happy! that you liked it so well

  • Bob Fox
    June 12, 2007
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    Only you

    Every write from that great heart of yours. Like a gentle spring rain


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      June 12, 2007
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      BobFox

      you are just the sweetest thank you so much for your comment...means a lot to me


  • coffeeangel316
    June 5, 2007

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    this is such a beautiful loving poem. I think you did a wonderful job. Keep penning my friend and sharing with us.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      June 5, 2007
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      coffeeangle316

      Thank you so very much my friend Im thrilled you enjoyed the poem...


  • Swan song gold member
    June 2, 2007

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    That is sweet. It is heart felt and honest. Clearly
    you show love and care and it feels heartfelt
    so it must be!


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      June 3, 2007
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      jeff swan

      Thank you my friend for your kind comment and she is a very special person a AP wife to my Ap brother...



  • Amera gold member
    June 1, 2007

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    I'm sure this is cherished. A wonderful tribute. I have known you for a while now and I don't know why you dropped off my fav's list. I have been missing some great work.

    Love,
    Amera ♥


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      June 1, 2007

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      Amera

      Thank you sweet one for your lovely comments and you do me great honor by reading my work

  • Swan song gold member
    May 28, 2007
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    This was a nice tribute to someone specail and it worked well. I hoep someone will write one that way for me someday.

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      May 29, 2007
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      jeff swan

      you are most kind my friend and im sure you will have your own tribute one day if not I will write it for youNia'ish


  • freespirit51
    May 28, 2007

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    Truly wonderful piece and very comforting words for your special friend. i found your words soothing and I hope they will as well.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      May 28, 2007
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      freespirit51

      Thank you my sister for your kind words and so glad you felt there love for her


  • -LilacThOughts- gold member
    May 27, 2007

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    Oh Gosh, my tears are here again...thank you so much for this wonderful soothing poem, it is the sort of thing he would say to me, he was gentle caring and always smiling...

    I wonder if I could have your permission to print this poem out, so that I can put below his photograph? I would love to read this every day, thank you again

    Congratulations on the HM, it is well deserved

    Much love
    ~Lilac

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      May 28, 2007
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      -LilacThOughts-

      You are most welcome my sister I do hope for your happiness in the days to comeplease take the poem as my gift to you


  • getsbetter
    May 27, 2007

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    Thank you for writing this Tender Wolfe, it's beautiful. And thank you for just being there for her...GETS

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      May 28, 2007
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      getsbetter

      Thank you so much my brother for your kind words and it was my honor to help make her fill better...Thank you very much for the trophy


  • Meme Wheeler
    May 24, 2007
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    Beautiful Tribute

    How beautiful is this piece...a wonderful tribute to friendship.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      May 28, 2007
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      Meme Wheeler

      Thank you so much my little one for your sweet comment, sure means alot to me


  • Desire gold member
    May 16, 2007

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    Precious!!

    Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw this is one Precious piece You have penned
    I imagine tears will fall~
    but much Appreciation for this Gem~
    written for a Gem

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart!
    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      May 16, 2007
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      Desire

      O' my sister im so glad you enjoyed it and think she will to...i sur hope so she has sufferd such a deep losethank you so much for reading


  • MoonlightBeam
    May 16, 2007
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    This is a really sweet poem. Wonderful!


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      May 16, 2007
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      Moonlight Beam

      Thank you so much my little one, im really glad you liked it...sure hope she will like it as well


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    May 16, 2007

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    Beautiful.......

    This is just beautiful....I think this is the best poem she can get....
    It's so lovely and sweet and I am sure she will get a lot of comfort by reading this...

    Beautiful
    XXJeannette

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      May 16, 2007
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      Wolf Mistress

      My sister thank you so much for your kind and loving words I do so hope she will like it and that it will bring her comfort in the days to come


  • Whoochi gold member
    May 16, 2007

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    Oh you have spilled such loving kind words of comfort and peace... am sure this will bring her everlasting to joy...excellent kindness in your soul, my newfound friend!

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      May 16, 2007
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      Whoochi

      O' my sister thank you so much...this one was hard to write...for such lose can carry so much pain...i do hope she will like it...dont even care if it wins, just hope it brings some comfort to her heart...

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