Spell it out
Tell me striat
Look me in the eyes
And try to lie to my face
Read My words
Then write your own
Listen to the voicemail
Left on your phone
Hear the trickle of my tears
Smile with you heart
Look at all the pain you caused
and try to restart.
win this war between me and you
and tell me how you feel
the frost lurking in your heart
is only all to real
A contest entry
- Abstract is the best by trytothink.
300 points, ended May 30, 2007, 17 entries
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Comments
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Nice write. Good luck in the contest, and keep up the good writing.
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I loved how it's in your face and it has such fire about it and just makes you want to comfort and take whatever hurts you away. Great Write and very heart tugging.
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I like this. It's something similar to what my friend and this guy are going through. She just wants him to open up to her, but he's reluctant. And they went through a really tough time a little while ago. So, yeah...And the third stanza is one I can really relate to. But I'm just rambling now. Good luck in the contest!
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