taking the pale opportunity
fleas trail my hair bare shins
threatening to suck more out of me
even more so than you have
your lover took leave
but you let her go
i'm not sure if its pride
or just general indifference
i'm not sure
if you know
either
great men have always talked about
the paths of life
how sometimes
they cross
how sometimes
they don't
they just run on forever
at a parallel
how sometimes
they cross
only for a moment
a blink of an eye
maybe even going unnoticed
never to cross again
i wonder if you're
steering your path
from mine
on purpose
i wonder why
how painful it will be
dear friend
if i come to learn
you want nothing of me
nothing from me
nothing to do with me anymore
why?
why?
why?
I've lost so much
I've lost that
dreamer aspect
i want it back
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow powerful and sad write. It's amazing how people can just turn their cheek and keep moving forward despite all that's happening.
Everyone comes to their senses at some point, but don't wait around for that I say. You could end up waiting forever starving your heart in their shadow waiting for them to take notice in you.
Well captured. May everything turn out for the best!
Take care of yourself and those you love.
Thank you for sharing this write
~Night
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I can only wish that this doesn't stay this way. Two too good of friends to have it just all thrown away. I like how you talked about the parallel people. Good poem, sore subject. I love you
~FeFe~
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