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The Beauty of Tears

Tears
so simple
yet meaning
so profound.
Everyone the same
but are they truly?
Each are spilled
in every emotional spectrum.
Joy, anger
Grief, repentance.
And everything in-between
and outside
that imaginary box.
Tears spilled
In every spectrum,
even those un-named.
Tears
so simple
yet meaning
so profound.

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  • Improv Machinery
    June 18, 2007

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    i really like this poem a lot. it says a lot in between the lines. i think that it might be workable into a song if ur into that kind of thing. thats what happens with me. ill be playing guitar and then a few lines of a poem will pop into my head and the rest just happens in a blur. excellent writing.
    Rob


  • suicidal-revenge
    June 4, 2007

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    oh wow really beautiful
    i really like it alot
    simple and short
    but alot of meaning
    and depth
    so little words can say so much.

    -suicidal revenge-


  • Olivias Violin
    May 16, 2007

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    good

    Reminds me of a famous poem; I collect, in a folder, the ones that I find interesting. I could send it if you have the time.

    Karen