With each black raindrop,
falling to equine rivers.
I am the ocean.
Author notes
equine = horse
A contest entry
- The Power Of Compression. by electric supernova.
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short sweet and very mysterious....
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Very pretty. Well constructed haiku as well. Mythology is one of my favourite topics and it's nice to see a poem that relates. Best of luck to you!
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Just a few minutes ago a small sentence got this huge comment, but I have to be honest when I say...don't get this. lol It's cool though.
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Ooooooooh pretty=] Neptunes chariot was drawn by horses right? I dont understand it, but sounds pretty and deep!=] Well done good sir!
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wow
you're really good at putting so much feeling and symbolism and stuff into just a few lines, well done!xxx
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i love it....
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Oooh! Very nice! I'm SO glad you jumped on the bandwagon! Great write! I love the final line - so powerful!
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wow... jus wow... short and sweet, eh?? for a 3 lined poem that was great! good luck in the contest!! xx
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