Part One - The Meeting
I've never had the love I crave,
the one I hoped would stay.
Although I've dated many men
things never went my way.
And then one day he smiled at me
with laughter in his eyes.
I thought that I had finally met
a man both kind and wise.
I felt like I was beautiful
when I was in his arms.
He always said the perfect thing
and wooed me with his charms.
Part Two - Our Life
I had plans to take things slowly,
to savor every day,
but then I fell so much in love
all caution swept away.
I asked him to move in with me,
to share my home and life.
I didn't ask a thing of him
but hoped to be his wife.
I cooked our meals and cleaned our house.
I indulged every whim.
I finally found a man to love
and took good care of him.
Part Three - Disillusionment
The only man I ever loved
was a scoundrel and a snake.
I finally had to toss him out.
I took all I could take.
When the other women called him
I kicked him to the street.
He used me and abused my trust
I cannot love a cheat.
He chopped my heart to pieces
and flushed it down the drain.
I've learned a painful lesson, and
I'll never love again.
A contest entry
- Ready, Set, GO! - Round 1 - "Part Poetry" -Open to everyone! by AureateCorona.
500 points, ended July 27, 2007, 37 entries
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Comments
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what a saddening ending. i hope this has not happened to you, and if it has i am so sorry that it did. people who abuse your trust hurts you so bad not only at the moment of realization but later as well when you try to trust again and can't.
as for the poem the rhyme flows very well, never forced, and for the most part isn't cliche rhymes one hears every day. the rythym gets ever so slightly tripped up here and there, but overall its still a nice poem with three solid peices that connect very well.
good write and good luck in the contest!
-AC-


