Delicate petals,
White tinged with cerise, the stem
Keeps touch with Mother.
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This is really good! Last line is super.
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very serene
like this pure and natural haiku, thank you for this entry,can one see anything more pure!! good luck in my contest
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aw this is nice too, love the serene peace of this piece, thank you for this entry, good luck
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I really like the theme of this poem...
Good luck in my contest!
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Delicate petals,
White tinged with cerise, the stem
Keeps touch with Mother.
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Nice haiku and its well penned. the flowerr you write of is quite nice and it makes one smile. any ways all round this is a sweetly penned Haiku and I enjoyed reading this. keep up the good work and good luck -
A beautiful background of dandelion and daisies. A great haiku.
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Wonderful. My favorite line is "Keeps touch with mother." It reminds me of planting flowers with my own mother when I was a child! It's simply a beautiful write!
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Wow
The background goes right with this piece. Brilliant job! The picture was simply divine. Good luck. -
That is a wonderful Haiku not only do I see a flower but I can see a little girl holding hands with her mother. This pooem has excellent duality. Very good!
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You give great imagery with few short words! Beautiful haiku!
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Nicely done. You have a wonderful image here and lead the reader onto more thoughts with the final line.
A good read.
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aw,
cute and deep!
really liking you haikus atm!
i've a haiku on my page now 2!! =]
*hops on the band wagon!!* lol
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well done
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WHAT A WONDERFULLY VIVIDE PIECE OF POETRY. I mean you have captured the daisy with depth... grace.
This is an excellent piece of haiku. STUNNING!
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