Fishes are many in the water
But none is funnier than this fellow
His beard is long
His moustache is strong
His dress is still stronger
Than the dress of a mailed knight
He has a sword on his forehead
Yet shies all fights
Because he has innumerable feet
And is extremely fond of flight.
A contest entry
- I Need Some Pick Me Ups by di ivers.
600 points, ended December 20, 2007, 19 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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Hehe I enjoyed this poem
very much. Nicely woven
thoughts.
Best of luck & thanks for entering
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This is very cute but I'm afraid some of the terms you've used may be confusing to an 8 year old, perhaps you have another that would be better suited?
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I think you are speaking of Spotted Prawns. Sort of a Rhino shaped nose thigamajig. Great poem!
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Heh nice one. I tried to picture it and I came up with the weirdest looking thing you could think of.. I got a nice chuckle out of it =)
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I would like to take time to thank you for your entry into my contest and wish you good luck....your poem did however bring a smile to my face again thank you
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Dear di ivers, Everybody here are very serious and sombre, asking and writing poems on serious themes. How many can do it for sheer fun? Take a count, you will find very few. Having innocent fun lightens our heart and gives a zest to living. Thanks for your appreciation.
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nice!!! good comedy. Descriptive, short and sweet. Good luck in the contest!
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