Too much going on to keep track
I'm finding it hard get back
Got this feeling, a lack-attack
Not hearing "He's sharp as a tack"
Hey, I think tacks have points
Straight, they got no joints
Do they follow "do's and doin'ts"
What are their favorite hauin'ts
Mayhaps I am a tack, my man
Just call me pin-head if you can
I'm quite mischievous, yes I am
After all, I'm sharp's biggest fan
Think I'll just stick around here
Might just sit and drink a beer
Lurk on the floor, creating fear
For any bare feet walking near
Okay, I'll stop this rambling tone
Thought you might have one funny bone
And, if the honest truth be known
I'm just a melting ice cream cone
A contest entry
- Abstract is the best by trytothink.
300 points, ended May 30, 2007, 17 entries
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LOL
oooooo do i want ice cream -
Very Funny
Upbeat with a smooth flow.
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Hehehe, this is delightful. Now I have this image in my head of an ice-cream cone drinking a beer. This is great, another of your masterpieces of humor.
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hehehe..Love this, silly twistings of words are too cute..and I can sympathise with the sentiment.
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Cool! I like this allot. Good form and rythem. Good luck in the contest
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