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"Where?" he said.
"You heard me!" growled the sargeant.
And he packed up his belongings,
and headed with his outfit

to the C130 standing there.
And he left his wife and kids so fair.
The Prez had thrown a mighty war,
it weren't up to him to ask, "What for?"

A soldier's duty is to roam and fight,
whether by full moon or the desert's light.
And he saw his children from the guts of the plane,
and tried to wave bravely overcoming the pain.

The men all around him were full of fire.
Not one of them yet had seen barbed wire.
And he wondered if any of this would be done,
as soon as they said?  Would they bolt?  Would they run?

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  • Ellis gold member
    December 5, 2007
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    I strongly think we (the U.S.) have no business invading other countries and telling them what to do. At the same time we can't have anyone killing (3,000) people here and bringing about destruction (bringing down buildings).

    It is very much complicated by the fact that the ones who did it (9/11) die. Most of them were from Saudi Arabia, not Afghanistan or Iraq.


  • gothkat2
    May 16, 2007
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    cool i like it