Hate to feel

I hate to feel alone
Shattered and left on my own
as I begin to fall
You move out of the danger zone
Let me hit the stone

I hate to feel lost
Like I have no home
And nobodys willing to help me along
As I walk around the streets
Wondering alone

I hate to feel broken
Shattered on the floor
In a million different pieces
You can just ignor

I hate to feel
Cos I always feel bad
Oh I hate to feel
Cos this feelings bad

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Option 5. titles

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Sebcuta
May 28, 2007

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I know how you feel I know that most people would probably say that, but this poem almost describes how I have been feeling for the past few months, awsome write and keep up the good work.
forget my memories
May 16, 2007

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Great way to use my Option.. i loved this write a lot it had amazing flow and everything just fit together so amazingly. Great job. Thank you for entering.