I walk a lonely road
A one way street
One place to go
I walk this road alone
Though I see people come and go
No one sees the tears upon my face
As I conceal my own grace
Theres no way back home
A contest entry
- Abstract is the best by trytothink.
300 points, ended May 30, 2007, 17 entries
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this sounds almost EXACTLY like Green Days song. like.... exactly. if your going to be inspired by a song, do something different with it maybe... i dunno. -
i walk a lonly road the only road that i ahve ever known
man thats sounds alot like green days Boulevard of Broken Dreams i hope you didn't get your inspiration from that song -
Very nicely written. A good start in my contest. Have fun and good luck in the contest.
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