The Sky means much more to you than to me.
You see azure blue philosophy,
metaphors up in the clouds;
and in the vast expanded heavens
poetic musing that calls aloud.
The Sea means much more to you than to me.
True meanings of this life you see.
Sea foam similes in the deep
unfolding out to far horizon
calmness to your mind it keeps.
You pen to me a picture, of vast imagery
I see only, over done again and again, hyperbole
Author notes
Option #2
A contest entry
- Options!! by forget my memories.
550 points, ended May 29, 2007, 19 entries
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Comments
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Excelent well written and a nice light meter all th eway through gave me a little chuckle awesome!
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satire
Sweet is satire when one wishes to convey the
truth of matters ; of the sky and seas and what
imagination can do, to one and the other .
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I like that a lot thank you for entering my contest i will keep you in mind as i juge.
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