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Impress me!!!

The things you can do to impress me
One can make me laugh
Take my hand and show me his love
Take me places I have never been
To the end of the world and back again
Just show me a good time
Be my friend and not my enemy
The things one can do to impress me
Take me by the hand
Show me a new world
Something I can look back on
To be like man," can we do that again"
Just come and get me with out me knowing it
Dont ask me were I wont to go
Suprise me
Show me a good time
And I will be alright
Take my shoes off and run me water with bubbles
And wash me up
Put on my bed clothes what ever you like
Then place a kiss on my for haead
And tell me how your day was as I tell you about mine

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  • ember-blair
    October 21, 2007

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    I really enjoyed it. It drew me in when I read it. Wonderful job. I thought the "then place a kiss on my forehead and tell me how your day was as i tell you about mine"
    I know how you feel. Boys are annoying.
    lol.
    but you have to love them.


  • TwiztidMaggot
    June 6, 2007
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    great job!

    this is very good. I love the flow! I like the way it is written! great job! keep it up!the best part was the first part... The things you can do to impress me
    One can make me laugh
    Take my hand and show me his love
    Take me places I have never been
    To the end of the world and back again
    I love the way it is written... great job! Keep up the good work!!!!!