You had my heart,
at one time.
But you chose to take it,
and squeeze the life out of it.
You said you loved me.
And only me.
But I found you,
in bed with that guy.
You disgust me.
How could you use me like that?
How could you play with my heart,
then run off to some guy?
Tears used to run down my eyes,
when I thought about what you did.
But now,
all I want to do,
is smash your face in.
The rage inside me has built up,
so I have a few words of advice for you.
Stay away from me,
you scum-sucking pig.
Unless you want to feel my fist slammed into your face.
Author notes
I pretty much hate you too.
Option 4.
It's about my ex-boyfriend, Brandon. =/ I hate him. Good thing I'm with a better guy, now~
A contest entry
- Everyone Can Enter, Severial Options by Gemini1983.
450 points, ended May 16, 2007, 36 entries
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wow this is some serious rage in this piece and that's great. it's funny that your ex's name is brandon....i kinda modelled this contest after someone with the same name. damn those boys named brandon i tell ya! lol
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lol! Stupid Brandons. Heh. Well, glad you liked it~
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Whoa...
That's a lot of rage there. I literally thought you were gonna reach through my monitor and punch me in the teeth. Very nicely done. =)
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:] HaHa. Thanks! That's the feeling I was going for. =D
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Wow. I'm sorry this happened. How awful. It's horrible when people aren't faithful to each other. Lots of emotion in this piece. Good luck in the contest.
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Thanks and thanks~!
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