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New One, Huh?

So you've got a new girl...
Was I that easy to forget?
I understand you're hurting,
But my choice I don't regret.

Part of me wants to haunt you,
Have my name echo through your mind.
But I know it was my choice to end it,
Thus I keep my thoughts confined.

I know you're a free agent,
But part of me is pained.
I can't forget that easily,
Part of me's still chained.

But I won't let you see that,
I'd die before I do.
'Cause no way in hell,
Am I giving hope to you.

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Yet another that I churned out.

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  • HisLoveIsLikeRain
    May 17, 2007
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    wow, i really like this poem i can relate to it very much, i am still good friends with my ex and he has a new girlfriend and i have a new boyfriend but yet i still love him very much, and im afraid to tell him becus i dont want to make it anymore akward then it already is, but keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!


  • LeaPan
    May 16, 2007

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    O.o

    Heyy! Im going through this right now..will u be my AP sis? and can i put this on my pro if i credit u?


  • adema1214
    May 16, 2007
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    nice one kari, whoot woot