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Giving In To Common Sense!

You hurt me once
You hurt me twice
But now I take
My mind's advice

I don't want to see you
Don't want to have you near
Don't want to remember
That I once held you dear

You need to leave me be
Stay away
Don't talk to me
I've got nothing left to say.

Author notes

Another from the heart. I have a lot going on right now..as you can tell.

Comments much appreciated!

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  • WayWithWords
    July 26, 2007

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    WOW! That says what I think so often but never have the guts to do. The flow was a bit off at times, but overall...VERY good!
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  • Dark Whispers
    May 24, 2007

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    L really like this poem, its full power and emotion but the last line kind of drops the power and emotion the poem had. great write

  • HisLoveIsLikeRain
    May 17, 2007
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    this is really good and i love it keep up the good work! comment mine ??