Let us suppose,
That in the world,
We, the two,
Alone.
Let us suppose,
The globe, the earth,
Is but an empty cone,
No one else,
Just you N me,
Just you N me,
Forlorn,
Guess what to do then,
What to do?
The only thing,
That I can guess,
Is love,
For life,
For existence,
For eternity,
For love,
I suppose.
Please tell me what you think
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really i amm reading your poem twice i know i've commented in the past , but you are such a sweet writer. i love your style soo much.
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wonderful... yeath! for eternity.. sensuel, tender and romantic
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you and me, i love you and you love me but then?? wonderful write, briliant thoughts, i am loving it.
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How Egyptian...I do like the ending here...'What to do? The only thing, that I can guess, is love, for life, for existence, for eternity, for love, I suppose.' And the sentiment of yearning to be alone with your beloved is so human and endearing as you've put it so simply here, as if it is inescapable and so you submit your all to it, this love...Well written, Ahkam...Peace to you, always, Rhonda
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nicee,sweet,romantic,short,direct to z point,really sweet,and of course the added glorry of cleopatra's pic is a lovely touch
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